Monday, March 8, 2010

"Overindulgence"

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In this story its talkin about her aunts Helens' favorite Chicken and dumplings. she talk about how good her dish is that youll get more by just trying out one more. also describes how her dish is made. She doesnt stop eating because her dish is so goo shell want more and more. Being so full and gettin so much of her aunts dish she gets full and has an Alka-Seltzer in hand begging for some relief. Because her stomach hurts of how ful she is she saiys next time shell only get one serving.

this is a nice story. Its quit interesting to read. Also because when the reader is readiin you can kno exactly what the person is saying and doin.